Unexpected Discourse Redux 2

I came back to this illo and I just wasn't happy with it...Unagain. It's kind of funny, because it's been a few years since I actually started this illustration and it's only until now that I feel I pushed myself to get the gesture and facial expression on Thadeus just right. He feels like an actual character now and the story going on around him just works better. "That's why pencils have erasers' I suppose.