Schrödinger's Blog Post

After doing a couple of pages of sketches this morning to illustrate a blog post I've written this was the first sketch I did and the one I finally chose. Not sure it's a fantastic metaphor for the post but I liked it more than the others.

You can see it in it's final resting place here: http://goo.gl/zaHI29

Does it work as an illustration? Or is it more of an embellishment?