Another product illustration attempt

Trying to capture another ConvertKit feature in illustrative form: tagging and segmenting.

Subscribers are tagged based on actions they take with your content, and you can create segments from a group of tags. (and lots of other ways... but this seemed the simplest to illustrate.)

Really struggled with this one and don't think it's there yet! Would love feedback on ideas to improve it.

In the attachment, check out the original UI and some other attempts at illustrating it.