[GIF] Feedback? - San Jose T-Shirt

Would love feedback on this t-shirt design, especially from people in San Jose or who have lived there.

All items included are clients request. I'm not normally accustomed to drawing with line only so it's been a good learning experience, it's the only way I could keep all of the random items feeling cohesive.

I thought with a design like this they could print it on any color shirt they wanted, but here are a few that I think are working pretty well.