Edgar Allen Poe

Inside the mind of Edgar Allen Poe. More lettering practice, script is 100% hand-drawn. Be sure to check out the ammo box design I just posted too! Any and all comments welcome. I've got some major weight inconsistencies here that I wasn't sure about, since I want it to look hand-drawn but not sure about how far it should go, haha. What do you all think? (You can really see it in the "bre")